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This future is wrong... by HazuraSinner This future is wrong... by HazuraSinner
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Twilight Sparkle's design for the "what if" story where she travels into an alternative and dark future.
A little warning. This concept involves my favorite pairings: Rainbow x Fluttershy, Pinkie x Twilight and Applejack x Rarity. Thou have been warned!

Here's the usual summary, however this one is about what happens to Twilight as the story unfolds, aaand is a little big:

After overcoming the shock of seeing Pinkie Pie's scarred figure, Twilight asked her what happened. Pinkie explained to her once long lost lover that she mysteriously disappeared fifteen years ago without a trace, and that during her absence Equestria fell into the Changelings hands. As heard the explanation Twilight started to realize what happened to her. She had been sent into the future, along with Star Swirl's book which lead her there.
The Princess's mind was full of questions but the first thing she could think of asking was where their friends were. Pinkie, saddened, told that they have been apart since an incident which occurred six years ago and that involved Spike. Pinkie takes Twilight in disguise to a cemetery on the outskirts of town and there they find a tombstone with Spike's name on it.
Twilight, devastated and unbelieving what her eyes saw, she opened Star Swirl's book of spells and desperately searched for the page that brought her there. As she found the said page she tried to concentrate her magic to open the portal but without effect. She was stuck there in that dreadful future.
Twilight trembled with both sadness and revolt, and then her eyes trailed into the distance, catching sight of Canterlot's castle, now destroyed by the Changelings but still standing tall. The Princess turned to Pinkie Pie with a determined look in her eyes and said they were going to regain the kingdom back from Chrysalis. And they were going to defeat her together with their friends. That was Twilight's only hope to make things right.
Their first stop was at the former Sugarcube Corner, where the Apple siblings now live. There they met Applejack, who was surprised to see Twilight after such a long time. Twilight explained what happened to her and requests for Applejack's help. The latter accepted without second thoughts but when the Princess said they'd need Rainbow Dash too she got reluctant about that. Applejack was confused why Twilight would even consider her after what happened to Spike, but the princess responded that it mustn't have been her fault, she would never lead her friends to their death.
After that the three girls headed to Fluttershy and Rainbow Dash's cottage, only to discover that Rainbow has been living on her own and that Fluttershy disappeared six years ago. Rainbow explained to them that she must've left because she blamed her for losing her sight. Applejack, shocked to hear what happened between them, turned unexpectedly to Rainbow and assured her that Fluttershy wouldn't leave her for something like that.
With Twilight's help the two girls talked things out and gaining back their lost friendship.
Now with Rainbow Dash on board, the team's next step was to reach Hayseed Swamps, where Rarity lived according to Applejack. Twilight suggested that their fastest way there was through the Everfree Forest, and even when her friends warned about how more dangerous it became the Princess didn't show any fear, only assuring that she would protect them at any cost.
As they traversed the forest they were attacked by a stranger who turned out to be none other than Fluttershy, and when the blind girl realized she almost killed her friends she panicked and apologized countless times. After that Rainbow Dash decided to talk with her to resolve their issues, and in the end they re-conciliated and got back together. Twilight was more than overjoyed to see their friends happily together again, and that gave her hope for a better future once they've defeated the Changeling Queen.
Now the main five headed to their final destination in order to find Rarity. As they arrived to the said refugee camp they notice it's not small at all, and to find their friend they would have to split up.
Applejack was the one who found her, and when Twilight and the others reunited with them she thought Rarity would want to join them but she was determined to not go. Furthermore, she begged them to not go either, she didn't want to lose anyone else.
Twilight comprehended her fears, after knowing what her friends have been through it was understandable, and she didn't want to force Rarity to join them. Instead, Twilight just explained why neither she or the others wanted to give up. They didn't want to live under the shadow of Chrysalis anymore, nor allow her to take everything they held dear. Twilight was determined to bring back the once prosperous kingdom of Equestria, for all those who've suffered and gave their lives in the war, for Spike.
When the main five left the camp they were surprised to see Rarity running after them with a few bags full of supplies. She had changed her mind. Apparently Twilight's words have reached her will to stand up and fight for her beliefs.
Now that the team was back together they still had one final challenge ahead of them and it lied on Canterlot's Castle. The night approached fast as the main six got closer to the mountain where the castle stood, and when Twilight recalled that they've been walking miles all day she decided it was best to rest before the final battle.
The six girls talked for a while, reminding the good old days and new plans they had to help rebuild the kingdom. And when they started to get tired they fell asleep one after another with exception of Twilight. She didn't feel like sleeping. Instead she thought on all the horrible things she saw and heard all day. She thought on how her absence made their whole world turn upside down.
As the sleep finally caught up with her, she glanced at each one of her friends and lover, all holding hands and sleeping close to each other, and before falling asleep she promised that wouldn't abandon them ever again.


Ok, I lied. This isn't the last piece of the set. Spike the Dragon will have his own piece too, he deserves it as much as the girls. Probably more.

Twilight Sparkle (My Little Pony) fyre-flye, Hasbro
Human concept me

On my Tumblr page: hazurasinner.tumblr.com/post/7…
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Yumarcs Featured By Owner May 4, 2015  Student Digital Artist
I'm gonna cry....This is too good for anything...I'm smiling and crying at the same time :) :(
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:iconbizaroobrainiac:
Ow. My Feels.Really Sad  
The lack of change on Twilight, along with her expression, really hammers home how much has changed in this world. I probably would've been more impactful in a group shot; but that's nitpicking.
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CrystalGreene Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2015  Professional Digital Artist
GREAT hair on all your artwork. love it.
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JMK-Prime Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2015  Student General Artist
Scary.
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Spartan0205 Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2015
Please end with HAPPY ending, I don't wanna cry anymore.
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HazuraSinner Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2015
It will have a happy ending, I assure you of that. Sorry that it made you sad! D8
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Davinci975 Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2014
is this a fan fic
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:iconhazurasinner:
HazuraSinner Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2014
Supposedly, but I'm still having doubts if I should finish writing it.
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BronyPonyMan Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2014
i'd say finish it. it would be a crime to not finish such an amazing story!

have you ever thought of putting up in the fimfiction website? your writing is amazing, and i feel that it would be crazy popular on there!  
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HazuraSinner Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2014
The first chapter of the story is already uploaded here, hazurasinner.deviantart.com/ar… . The majority of the fans demanded the story, and even though I'm not the best writer around I decided to make the story public instead of locking it up. I just hope it's not a disappointment, for some reason I draw more than I write. 'XD
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BronyPonyMan Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2014
well, they do say that a pictures worth a thousand words, so you are a fantastic writer, it's just that your 'written word' is more colorful and appealing to the eye. and i did read the story, i was just thinking that if you put it on a site dedicated to stories about mlp, it might garner even more attention. not to mention that it could draw even more fans to your page on deviantart.com if you link your pictures to the story as it goes along.

just food for thought.
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HazuraSinner Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2014
Thank you very much, it means a lot to hear such positive feedback on my works.
I have considered that but since I don't make much intention of writing other stories, I'm far too lazy for that unfortunately, I don't think it's worth to make an account on that site just for this story. :/
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BronyPonyMan Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2014
that's to bad. welp, always know that if you do decide to do it, i'll definitely read it! 
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Davinci975 Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2014
you have a good story base
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:iconhazurasinner:
HazuraSinner Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2014
Thank you very much.
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Davinci975 Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2014
your welcome
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Amaris-the-Demon Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I love this
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somercet Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2014
:( Man, that face.
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doubletroubledemon Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2014  Student General Artist
good job la in love 
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ColonelBSacquet Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2014
Couldn't she use "reverse gears" on that time-travelling formula ?
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:iconhazurasinner:
HazuraSinner Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2014
Unfortunately the spell doesn't work in reverse, Twilight tries to use it but it fails.
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ColonelBSacquet Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2014
So, basically, she has to create her own time travelling spell in order to go back in time, so everything that has been done is undone ? Great, painstaking task, it sure is.
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ImperfectXIII Featured By Owner May 21, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You know, I'm not all that into dark stuff when it comes to My Little Pony (to this day, I've still never read Fallout: Equestria), but this is still one of the coolest concepts I've ever heard. I can't wait to read the complete story when it's done! :D
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HazuraSinner Featured By Owner May 22, 2014
Well, rest assured that you're not the only one, I'm not a fan of dark themed stories too. Especially with a cute show like My Little Pony. But this idea was so interesting, even if too dark, that I had to make it happen. Thank you, even if it's not your type of story I'm glad that you like what I did with the concepts so far. =)
I just hope to not disappoint with the story, I'm not a decent writer as I am an artist but I'm trying to not make it confusing. XD
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teastainedcat Featured By Owner May 19, 2014  Student Artist
Twi looks awesome in this :D
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SongBird567 Featured By Owner May 16, 2014
Is there an actual story somewhere and if not could you tell me which of these I should read in order  
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HazuraSinner Featured By Owner May 17, 2014
Well the story isn't out, I'm still working on it and will try finish it. As for the order of these pieces, first is Pinkie's, then Applejack, Rainbow, Fluttershy and finally Rarity. Twilight's contain a summary of the main events in the story while the others contain their past so it should be read last, but it's ok if you didn't read for this order.
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SongBird567 Featured By Owner May 17, 2014
Thank you. I have been reading them andthey're really good. 
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HazuraSinner Featured By Owner May 17, 2014
Thank you, I won't make any promises about completing the actual story but I'm trying and if I post it will be announced here. =)
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SongBird567 Featured By Owner May 17, 2014
Sounds cool, and i just want to say i love your profile
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HazuraSinner Featured By Owner May 18, 2014
Thank you. =)
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YinHaru95 Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Adorei!
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Hanna030 Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2014
This is awesome QvQ
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RainBowDash678 Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
not going to lie it made me cry after i read this, but in those tears it inspired me to write a fanfiction! so thank you ma'am for the inspiration!
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HazuraSinner Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2014
I'm glad that even though it made you cry, and I'm really sorry for that, it gave you inspiration. =)
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RainBowDash678 Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah. It was a great story though, your a good writer!
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HazuraSinner Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2014
Thanks, I usually suck at coming up with stories and decent writing too. And this isn't the full story though, it's just a small summary of what happens and I left the ending out because there's still chances I might write the whole thing.
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RainBowDash678 Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
well i bet if you do ever write the hole stroy and ending it will be pretty awesome! ^^
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HazuraSinner Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2014
Aw thank you for the support. =)
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RainBowDash678 Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
always glade to support someone with a good imagnation! (sorry if i spelled that last word wrong) and i was wondering if you wouldnt mind reading my, my little pony fanfic i wrote.if i want.
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HazuraSinner Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2014
Well, I can't say I'll read it now because I have so many important things to do, but you can leave the link here and I'll check it out when I can.
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jonaslion52 Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This still reminds me of Terminator 
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SktrbyEd Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2014
POOR Twilight Sparkle
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:iconcrystalzoedestiny:
CrystalZoeDestiny Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2014  Student Digital Artist
But it turned out there?!
Not have continued?! 
They managed to save Equestria?!
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thefrogwhisperer Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Hmm...I can't help but be a bit curious about the Cutie Mark Crusaders during all of this...
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HazuraSinner Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2014
The three of them are ok, they barely went to the battlefield because their sisters wouldn't allow it, and they are mostly helping folks in Ponyville.
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thefrogwhisperer Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Yay:) (Smile) 
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Nadin201 Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2014
Oh god, I can't say how much I love the gloves of Twilight and Pinkie O.O
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Linkonpark Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2014  Student Artist
Spike probably faked his death.
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Pinkster7 Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Cool story! (not cool story bro, but just cool story. XD)

I love the picture, you are a wonderful artist!
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