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If Twilight was here she would keep fighting! by HazuraSinner If Twilight was here she would keep fighting! by HazuraSinner
That's why I won't give up!

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Rainbow Dash's design for the "what if" story where Twilight Sparkle travels into an alternative and dark future.
A little warning. This concept involves my favorite pairings: Rainbow x Fluttershy, Pinkie x Twilight and Applejack x Rarity. Thou have been warned! XD

Here's the usual summary regarding the character's background:

After hearing from Pinkie Pie about Twilight's disappearance, Rainbow Dash immediately voluntered to help in the search of their friend.
But when Fluttershy fell unexpectedly ill with high fever she had to choose to give up the search temporarily and take the sick girl back home.
When the two pegasi arrive at Ponyville Fluttershy tells Rainbow Dash to not worry about her and to go assist Pinkie and Spike in their quest, but she refused as saw the awful state of her girlfriend and decided to stay to take care of her.
Days after Fluttershy's recovery Ponyville is attacked by the Changelings and the two pegasi along with their friends fought the army and won but almost miraculously.
As the days go by the attacks are more frequent and the folk from Ponyville can barely survive. Rainbow Dash decided that she had to take a stand and organized an army with the people of their town, along with a spying team which was in charge of finding weaknesses from the Changelings.
Thanks to her leadership the townsfolk managed to survive for much longer, and then one day she received news from her spy squad. They had discovered a secret passage which would lead right into the castle in Canterlot.
Rainbow Dash elaborated a plan which was sure to work, and even when Applejack warned she ignored. This time they were going to defeat Chrysalis.
However, her plan failed. Chrysalis and her army was expecting their arrival since the beginning.
Rainbow Dash and her friends fought for their lives but they were in disadvantage and were falling fast at the hands of the Changelings.
And when she saw Fluttershy getting hurt her opponents took the chance and inflicted a dreadful cut on her right eye.
Trying to ignore the pain Rainbow rushed to Fluttershy's side and desperately tried to protect her with just half of her vision working.
The absence of her right eye became a huge blind spot, for she couldn't see a Changeling striking from that side and slicing her right arm.
The mane five managed to return to Ponyville but at a high cost, and Rainbow Dash and Applejack argue with each other about what happened. The farm girl cuts the friendship bonds with the pegasus girl and her other friends follow out, being Fluttershy the only one who stays by her side.
However, one night Rainbow Dash woke up and to find that she left, and the only thing she left behind was the ring Rainbow Dash gave her when she proposed years ago.
At the present, Rainbow Dash still fights the Changelings on her own when they come for a fight and none of them defeated her until now even though she's missing an eye and an arm.

Coming up next is Fluttershy!

Rainbow Dash (My Little Pony) *fyre-flye, Hasbro
Human concept me

On my Tumblr page: hazurasinner.tumblr.com/post/6…
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:iconearthyrainbowkitty:
EarthyRainbowkitty Featured By Owner May 22, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i need to see a fanfiction made of this!
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:iconhazurasinner:
HazuraSinner Featured By Owner May 22, 2015
I've been writing the story due to popular demand, Bonds Unshaken by Time -chapter 1-
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:iconearthyrainbowkitty:
EarthyRainbowkitty Featured By Owner May 22, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thank you so much








im crying so hard right now!
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:iconbizaroobrainiac:
BizarooBrainiac Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2015
This world has clearly taken it's toll on Rainbow Dash.
I love the cuts on jeans & left arm show that favors that side in battle.
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:iconcolonelbsacquet:
ColonelBSacquet Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2015
Fighting better with one eye and one arm than when being completely able-bodied? Fantasy logic, I tells ya.
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:iconcrystalgreene:
CrystalGreene Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2015  Professional Digital Artist
Pirate!
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:iconkingrat2:
kingrat2 Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2014
were do I read the story?
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:iconhazurasinner:
HazuraSinner Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2014
I posted the first chapter a few days ago, you can read it here hazurasinner.deviantart.com/ar…
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:iconamaris-the-demon:
Amaris-the-Demon Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Yersh :iconimhappyplz:
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:iconkalusonyatagami890:
Kalusonyatagami890 Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
that's me right there still fighting taking revenge
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:iconcolonelbsacquet:
ColonelBSacquet Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2014
"The farm girl cuts the friendship bonds with the pegasus girl"

Alliance falling apart means lost war. :-(
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:iconrainbowdash420:
RainbowDash420 Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2014
Is this a mgs4 raiden thing??
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:iconhazurasinner:
HazuraSinner Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2014
No, it's a completely different, read the description please before taking conclusions.
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:iconrainbowdash420:
RainbowDash420 Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2014
...DA so uptight these days nvm then
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:iconblooming-blossom:
Blooming-Blossom Featured By Owner May 18, 2014  Student Digital Artist
omfg her hand....
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:iconsoulsaber67:
Soulsaber67 Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Now Dashie reminds me of Black Star
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:iconkrazybrony:
Krazybrony Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2014  Student Filmographer
yea she dose
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:iconsoulsaber67:
Soulsaber67 Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
LOL
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:iconkrazybrony:
Krazybrony Featured By Owner May 9, 2014  Student Filmographer
lol
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:iconsoulsaber67:
Soulsaber67 Featured By Owner May 19, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
lolol
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:iconkrazybrony:
Krazybrony Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2015  Student Filmographer
Lulz
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:iconrainbowdash678:
RainBowDash678 Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
reading fluttershys and rainbow dash's made me ball my eyes out.....
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:iconpendrake47:
pendrake47 Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2014

HazuraSinner ...



1. Another good Dark Future (DF) work.


2. Scarring.  Excellent facial detailing with the stitched cut across her right eye.  Another excellent detail are the leg scars showing beneath the torn pants, small subtle details like that are a positive sign of care, effort, and skill in any Artist's works.


3. The harsh stormy background was the correct and strong addition to this work, contributing to the dark theme of the picture and its series.


4. The one minor critique I would put forward, and this is only because of the sword enthusiast (or "sword nerd" ) in me, is DF-Rainbow's sword.  I would have advised a katana with sword-guard and woven grip, over the chokuto ("straight sword") style with its smooth grip.  Why?  Because the latter is designed for ambidextrous swordsmen, with no sword-guard and smoother grip for quicker/easier changing of hands (plus disguising the sword too, of course); also, straight swords are slower on the quick-draw (thus why many swords are curved, regardless of geography & culture).  Regardless of either sword-type, both should be double-edged (meaning both sides blade-sharp) since DF-Rainbow is a one-armed swordswoman, so she can swing her blade in both directions.


5. If you had really wanted to go towards a particularly grim angle, you could have portrayed DF-Rainbow having had her right wing severed in-tandem to her right arm and eye.  That would have definitely topped off the visual impact of a Dark Future Equestria.

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:iconl-master:
L-MASTER Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
extreme O.O
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:iconemtav:
emtav Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2014
I wonder where these concept came from?
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:iconhazurasinner:
HazuraSinner Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2014
The idea of the dark future was sort of inspired by an episode of TMNT, the rest came out naturally.
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:iconemtav:
emtav Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2014
I know an episode in the same version of tmnt where they see nightmares. Also had dark moments. Those episodes didn't get deeper investigation in my opinion.
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Warmandude7 Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2014
Will this be a complete FanFiction? If so, where may I find it once it is completed?
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:iconhazurasinner:
HazuraSinner Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2014
I'm not sure yet, and if by any chance I write it down it will be posted here.
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:icondemonpup45:
demonpup45 Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
That is beautiful!
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:iconshadows-truth:
Shadows-Truth Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
.O. Wow! I love this and the idea for the series! Also, it seems we have the same favorite pairings!
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:iconmayrothwell:
MayRothwell Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2013
Omg this series is seeming reaaly good! Poor mane 5!
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:icontanaka-sentaro:
Tanaka-Sentaro Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This reminds me one of the Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles episodes.
Smart one disappeared...can't do anything without him...And global "pizdec" come.
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jonaslion52 Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
The scar she has on her eye reminds me of the one big boss will have in MGS5.
Or was this an coincidence
Anyway awsome
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:iconremanigia:
RemaNigia Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Wow, stunning image and eically well thought out story.  It's funny, I almost feel like she'd never leave Rainbow Dash, and after reading our description here I imagned that the changelings stole Fluttershy away and just left her ring to keep Rainbow Dash from chasing after them. You really are a great artist and storyteller to inspire stories in my head XD I can't wait to see Fluttershy's design and see what you have in mind for her! :D beautiful (and sad) artwork :)
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HazuraSinner Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2013
Thank you very much, and glad to know I give some inspiration. =)
Well, that could be one of the possible scenarios that leaded Fluttershy to disappear but nope that's not it~ I'll try to get her drawing done soon. Everyone is getting anxious to know what happened. ''XD
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RemaNigia Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
it is driving meh crazyyyyyyy!!!! 8D haha no rush, I cannot wait to see how she turns out, but I'm also nervous, seeing as what happened with Pinkie Pie, Rainbow Dash, and Applejack :iconscaredplz:
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:iconniclove:
NicLove Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
What's with R.D.'s R.-arm?
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:iconhazurasinner:
HazuraSinner Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2013
Read the drawing's description and you'll know.
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:iconniclove:
NicLove Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist

Why did F.S. go?

 

P.s. Can you please link the others?

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:iconhazurasinner:
HazuraSinner Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2013
Once I upload Fluttershy's piece it will be all explained in her background story.

To find the other pieces just click in my gallery and the MLP folder, they are all there.
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:iconniclove:
NicLove Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist

Ok.

 

I C !

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:iconravenfireflutterdash:
Why did Fluttershy leave Rainbow Dash
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:iconkonrax:
Konrax Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2013  Student General Artist
I'm really liking these stories and art, so far, I want to make a fan fic of me somehow ending up in that world. Starting at ponyville library where pinkie pie is at.

THERE SHOULD BE A FAN FIC OF THIS! >: O
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RuyaCross Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2013  Student Digital Artist
I'm so drawn into the story, and all the art work. It's so beautiful.
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:iconnintendogal55:
NintendoGal55 Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I'd just been reading all of these, and it's sooooo sad. :< But I really liked all of the designs you made for them so far! =D It's especially tense seeing that there were some lost limbs along the way. It really adds a sort of edge to the whole story and visual elements, like it really is a showcase of just how dangerous and serious this all is.

:cries: I can only hope some good will come out of it all. :'3

Either way, these are all fantastic!
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HazuraSinner Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2013
I know and I'm reeeeeeally sorry for making you, and everyone else, feel sad. This was a project which I had to get out of my head no matter what (or it would never leave and torment me forever! XD)

Oh yes, I'll assure you that in the end everything will turn out well. There's chances I don't write the story but when I'm done with the mane cast designs I'll make sure to post a short comic page of the end. No way I'll leave everyone hanging! ;3

Thank you! =D
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NintendoGal55 Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
That's okay! X3 I know the feeling! I certainly have saddening ideas and plots in my mind, and they can be soooo tormenting! :XD: It's definitely different when you're on the reading end of it!

Still though, yay! =D I love good endings, even when the journey getting there is a tough road! ;3 Good luck with it! Whether you write it or do a little comic page, it should be really interesting to see! :3 :glomp: I look forward to it!

You're welcome! :meow:
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HazuraSinner Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2013
Ah, in a way I'm glad that I'm not the only one with such tormenting ideas. XD
That's true, when the roles of writer and reader reverse things get so different.

It's what I usually do in my stories, the characters will have their well deserved happy ending but the path to it is hard! It's kind of a reflection of real life because no one gets everything right away and in an easy way, we got to work and fight for what we want.
Thank you, and I hope to not disappoint with the end! =D
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NintendoGal55 Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Yup, you'd be surprised! XD I'm into fluffy cuteness, but every now and then, dark torment will leak its way into some ideas! It's pretty crazy! Oh yes, when you're the creator, you know all that's going to happen and you just want to say things to put the readers at ease. Yet at the same time, you still want to keep them guessing. XD But then when you're on the reader side, you're like, "Noooo! I can't look! The worst is going to happen, I know it!" XD

=D Yeah, pretty much! Well-deserved happy endings are always awesome by me! Sometimes they can be bittersweet, but even that works well.

I look forward to it! :la:
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