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Comic Commission 6 by HazuraSinner Comic Commission 6 by HazuraSinner
Comic Commission by :icon11thinv:

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This comic is discontinued

Story by 11thinv and can be found here: carolynmarks1.blogspot.pt/2013…
Characters (My Little Pony) fyre-flye, Hasbro
Human concept by me
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:iconkatieg626:
katieg626 Featured By Owner May 15, 2015
I love this! Please make more ^w^ 
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:iconhazurasinner:
HazuraSinner Featured By Owner May 15, 2015
Please don't say that, the story is just a lame copy paste of Henry V but with ponies, I hated this because of Celestia being so out of character and evil. This was commissioned work, and it won't be continued because the guy who was asking for these pages was lying to me about his objectives for the whole comic.
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:iconkatieg626:
katieg626 Featured By Owner May 15, 2015
Okay, I'm really sorry. But I did something and now I can't find that link. . .I am really interested though
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:iconcolonelbsacquet:
ColonelBSacquet Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2015
Man, Celestia is really loathsome in here. True and honest obligations? Stick those up yours, Sun Butt. We're not your little toys to be bossed around, we're free men. :iconwilliamwallaceplz:
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:iconkatieg626:
katieg626 Featured By Owner May 15, 2015
Really? I never really liked Celestia until I read this. The honor and dedication she has towards her mother. Is that not honorable? After reading this, I actually like her character more. 
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:iconcolonelbsacquet:
ColonelBSacquet Featured By Owner May 15, 2015
Yes, it is honourable. Maybe even most honourable. Unless it leads to become a dictator, an invader.
Imho.
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:iconkatieg626:
katieg626 Featured By Owner May 15, 2015
Perhaps. . .I guess I just don't see it like that. Sorry :/
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:iconcolonelbsacquet:
ColonelBSacquet Featured By Owner 6 days ago
Sorry? Why?
You don't have to be sorry, now, do you?
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:iconkatieg626:
katieg626 Featured By Owner 6 days ago
I don't know. . .I'm sorry >///< 
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:iconcolonelbsacquet:
ColonelBSacquet Featured By Owner 5 days ago
What? Why did you say ...

...

You did that on purpose, didn't you? ;-P
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:iconkatieg626:
katieg626 Featured By Owner 4 days ago
Not sure :P 
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:iconhazurasinner:
HazuraSinner Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2015
Blame the one who commissioned me for this. I didn't like drawing this Celestia one bit, it goes against what the real character is and how she behaves.
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:iconkatieg626:
katieg626 Featured By Owner May 15, 2015
Perhaps. I wish the original Celestia WAS this Celestia. You did really well, thank you ^w^ 
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:iconhazurasinner:
HazuraSinner Featured By Owner May 15, 2015
Oh please don't say that...Celestia being like this crappy and awful copy of Henry V? I'm sorry but I don't agree. Drawing her like this disturbed me in so many ways, she shouldn't be portrayed as a b*tch.
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:iconcolonelbsacquet:
ColonelBSacquet Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2015
Ah, true ... it is not endearing at all. Though ... artistic license and all, I guess.:iconcelestiashrugplz:
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:iconcecil475:
Cecil475 Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2015
I really like the artwork. *goes to read the story*
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:iconhazurasinner:
HazuraSinner Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2015
Thank you, although the story is nothing but a copy paste of Henry V but with MLP. It's not really captivating or original at all.
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:iconaceina:
aceina Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2014
why was this discontinued
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:iconhazurasinner:
HazuraSinner Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2014
Because the guy who commissioned me wasn't completely honest with me since the beginning. He had plans to publish this thing and also pages he had commissioned to a friend of mine, without us knowing, I only knew because he happened to blab it out when I finished this page. And I explicitly tell my costumers that what I do is not to publish, it's just for personal use without profits. Plus, publicizing something that isn't even mine or his, nor the characters nor the story, would give troubles that I don't want to be a part of. That's why this was discontinued. 
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:iconaceina:
aceina Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2014
understandble and smart of you
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:iconhazurasinner:
HazuraSinner Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2014
Thank you.
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:iconkatieg626:
katieg626 Featured By Owner May 15, 2015
I understand this and all, But I still kinda want to read more. ^w^ If you make another comic or story, I MUST READ IT! ^w^ 
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:iconhazurasinner:
HazuraSinner Featured By Owner May 15, 2015
Then I'm sorry to disappoint you but this won't be continued ever, even if I was going to be paid I wouldn't want to do more of this crap.
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:iconhavocofwar:
havocofwar Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2014
i know this is supposed to be a serious moment with war on the horizon and all but all i see is the second to last panel of pure pinkieness and i cant help but laugh at the situation 
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:icondarkignika:
DARKIGNIKA Featured By Owner May 25, 2014  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
So was this a fan fic or what?
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:iconhazurasinner:
HazuraSinner Featured By Owner May 26, 2014
From what I had to read it was kind of a copy of Henry V from Shakespeare but with MLP characters. XP
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:iconthedrawingdude12:
TheDrawingDude12 Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Im going to be honest here. I did not understand a word she said. At all.
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Sergios117 Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2014
The art reminds me of Legend of Korra for some reason. Nice!
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:iconaaaaceace:
aaaaceace Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2014
Any one else think Celestia is taking this a bit far? I mean the treaty is over a thousand years old, so why should the prince agree to honor it? I know if I was the ruler of some nation and some princess told me that she now ruled due to a treaty that my great X 10000 grandfather signed, I would tell her to get lost.  
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:icon11thinv:
11thinv Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2014
suppose celestia woke up one morning & lost her

mind

or she had a bad dream about her mother just before twilight found the treaty

people act out of character all the time

for a variety

of

reasons
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:iconcolonelbsacquet:
ColonelBSacquet Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2015
"people act out of character all the time"

If they do act out of character all of the time, then it's not really out of character, now is it?
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aaaaceace Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2014
But this is way out of left field. Why does she care so much about a treaty that is over a thousand years old? Judging by what she says, it sounds like she is planning to go to war over it, which is just to far out of character for her. 

But then Hazura Sinner maybe planning on explaining why this treaty is so important. I just hope it isn't something silly like Celestia is just honoring her mother's memory, because going to war and condemning thousands to death and suffering just to honor some dead person is pretty selfish.   
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:icon11thinv:
11thinv Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2014
Try this one for size

One night, just before bed, Twilight is reading Henry V

& afterward she has an uncanny dream/nightmare

Where every pony but her acts so ooc

How do you think she might

Respond

?
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aaaaceace Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2014
I don't under stand what that comment was about? Are you emplying that this is all a dream? Also what does have to do with my comment about Celestia acting out of character?  
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:icon11thinv:
11thinv Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2014
It could be a dream

The framework is not important

What is important is

Twilight is caught up in events not of her own choosing

But she rolls with the punches

She goes with the flow

She lives to fight another day

And that's what

Important
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:iconaaaaceace:
aaaaceace Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2014
That has nothing to do with my original comment. I was talking about Celestia not Twilight.
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:icon11thinv:
11thinv Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2014
i was thinking of the

treaty of tours

where england & france tried to end the hundred years war

which held that when either henry v or charles vi died

france would revert to english rule

didn't work out because they both died within weeks of each other

but it was a good

plan
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:iconvzara:
vzara Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2014
O_O such good art. really impressed
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:icondrowin:
Drowin Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Damn, would have loved to see the War-like Celestia assume the port of Mars, and at her heels, leashed in like Diamond Dogs, would have been Pinkie, Dash, and Derp crouching for employment.

I spent entirely too long on that comment. Great piece.
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:icon11thinv:
11thinv Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2014
i still

enjoyed it

^___^
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:iconthekoboldnecromancer:
TheKoboldNecromancer Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2014  Student Writer
Discontinued, but your artwork will always shine.  :D
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:iconvale123sb456:
Vale123sb456 Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
oohhhhhh!!!! soooo awsoommmee!!!! loved it!!! awsome job!!Neko (Lennon)  Little Busters [V9] 
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:icondrag0n123:
Drag0n123 Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2014  Student General Artist
war is coming
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:iconmatsuotanuki:
MatsuoTanuki Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2014
Did she eat the 'Complete Works of Shakespeare' or something?
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:icon11thinv:
11thinv Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2014
every

last

drop

*sluuuuuuurpppp*
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:iconmatsuotanuki:
MatsuoTanuki Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2014
heehee.
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:iconbrowniecomicwriter:
BrownieComicWriter Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
SOARIN!!

:iconsqueeeeplz:
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:icon11thinv:
11thinv Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2014
my reaction

also

!
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:icondemosthenes-101:
Demosthenes-101 Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2014
Luna already knows what is going to happen. Her expressions in the previous page made that clear! :iconlunamlpplz: (That omfg expression you gave her was priceless!)  So DO they keep the ping pong balls?
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:iconhazurasinner:
HazuraSinner Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2014
Thank you! I really had to give Luna those expressions because the situation with Celestia here is in fact so bizarre. Plus, it's how I felt about these parts so I kind of transmitted that through Luna. XD
Honestly I don't know, the ping pong balls aren't mentioned ever again after this.
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