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Comic Commission by :icon11thinv:

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This comic is discontinued

Story by 11thinv and can be found here: carolynmarks1.blogspot.pt/2013…
Characters (My Little Pony) fyre-flye, Hasbro
Human concept by me
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:iconcolonelbsacquet:
ColonelBSacquet Featured By Owner 4 days ago
So just because you mother was a potentially power-hungry tyrant, you will do as she wanted? And shed seas of blood?
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:iconvalenmosquera:
ValenMosquera Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2014
 Aj :heart:
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:iconmysticcrystalwolf:
MysticCrystalWolf Featured By Owner May 20, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
wow~ Celestia is not a force to be reckon with! XD
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:iconfuturetrunks22:
FutureTrunks22 Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2014
who is this guy?
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:icon11thinv:
11thinv Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2014
the guy with the beard?

he's the ambassador from

escambria
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:iconthebestpieever:
TheBestPieEver Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2014
Such a shame this is discontinued :/ I wasn't all that invested in the story, but it was a way to get tons of awesome expressions and poses of human ponies from you.
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:iconhazurasinner:
HazuraSinner Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2014
Well this was discontinued because the person who asked me for these pages wasn't totally honest from the beginning with me, only after doing these he said that he intended to publish a book after the whole thing was done and, not only I do commissions for personal use only but it's also illegal because these characters aren't mine or his.
Anyways, since you were just looking up for this because of my art then don't worry because I'll keep making pony art in the future. =)
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:icondemosthenes-101:
Demosthenes-101 Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2014
Ok....I am pretty much terrified by Celestia now! :icontwilightomfgplz:  Was this truly an insult from the Prince of Escambria or was this a message of good will that was horribly misinterpreted?  :icontwilightawkwardplz:  Either way this is not going to end well at all is it? And leave it to Pinkie to chime in at the worst possible time! :icontwilightfacehoofplz:
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:iconhazurasinner:
HazuraSinner Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2014
I get the feeling of being terrified by Celestia, you should've seen my reactions as I advanced these panels, so much dark energy around. '8D I'm going to need to draw the Celestia we know and love after I'm done with these to get back some positivism.
I'm not sure, this is just my guess, I think the ping pong balls was a metaphor for an insult, like "you have no balls, Equestria". I think this because there will be a war after this situation... '>_>
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:iconaaaaceace:
aaaaceace Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2014
Really? Celestia is going to go to war over a thousand year old treaty that could be considered null in-void and a bunch of ping pong balls? Why? Is this tinny piece of land so important that she is willing to condemn thousands to death for it. Because that does not sound anything like Celestia, unless you are writing her to be evil and is trying to conquer the world or something. 

Honestly if I was this prince I would personally go to see Celestia, ask to see the treat, go inside the closest bathroom, take a dump, then use said treaty to wipe my butt before handing it back to her. Because what right does a dead man have to signing over my nation after he has been rotting away in some long forgotten tomb for a thousand year? His signature is worth less than the paper it was written on or the dung that is now smeared across it.  

Of course following this I would return to the army I had waiting for me along the border which I would then use to invade Equestria before Celestia had a chance to gather her own forces and invade Escambria since she was obviously using the treaty as an excuse to do just that.  
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:icon11thinv:
11thinv Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2014
i guess you just don't get it

she didn't write this

i did
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:iconaaaaceace:
aaaaceace Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2014
Then my comment is directed toward you. Now while I was not being overly harsh in my criticism, I actually do enjoy you write for the rest of the comic. It is just here where it seems to be approaching the ledge and if you don't take the time to explain why Celestia is taking such drastic actions then it will go over the ledge and head first into a pile of rocks. But I do have confidence in your ability.     
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:icon11thinv:
11thinv Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2014
everyone's relationship with their mother is

different

that's why i came up with the treaty business

i was struggling with tia's motivation for turning into such a warmonger

because otherwise i thought this was a good fit for mlp

& for good bad or indifferent

this is what i came up

with
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:iconaaaaceace:
aaaaceace Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2014
So she is doing this only for the sake of her mother's honor. Well in that case, DOWN WITH EQUESTRIA AND ALL HAIL ESCAMBRIA!!! 
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:icon11thinv:
11thinv Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2014
If you can't beat 'em

Join 'em

That's my philosophy

Any who's
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:icondemosthenes-101:
Demosthenes-101 Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2014
:icontwilightfacehoofplz:  Well they DID ask for it.............
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:iconcolonelbsacquet:
ColonelBSacquet Featured By Owner 4 days ago
Did they? Celestia invoked a now-null and void treaty to say that she owns their butts? What was she expecting as a reply?
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:iconironmatt1995:
Ironmatt1995 Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2014
Luna's face "sis the f(^$# are you doing!?"
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:iconsupergarurumon:
Supergarurumon Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
balls XD 
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:iconxk123x:
xK123x Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2014
LOOOOOL Celestiaaa! OMG :love:
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:icondandrazen:
DanDrazen Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2014   Writer
That lady knows how to give a speech!
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:iconphantomblade88:
phantomblade88 Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2014
Damn. Who would've thought Celestia would be a hardass about this.
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:iconcyber-angel-rowan:
Cyber-Angel-Rowan Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I guess you could say,

She's got BALLS.

YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!
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:icon11thinv:
11thinv Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2014
who

indeed
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:iconkisara16:
Kisara16 Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2014  Hobbyist
looool princess lunas face !!!!!!!!!!!!!
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:iconswanofwar:
SwanofWar Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2014  Professional Writer
Dude, I just clicked on this and I LOVE how you draw Celestia!!!!
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:icon11thinv:
11thinv Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2014
that's why i commissioned her

when i saw her human mlp designs i said

i have to write something for this

artist
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:iconvector-brony:
Vector-Brony Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Is this base of Henry V by Shakespeare.  I reconised the speech
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:iconhazurasinner:
HazuraSinner Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2014
Yes, you are correct, it is based on that.
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:iconvector-brony:
Vector-Brony Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
And my English teacher said I didn't pay attention in her class. Ha! 
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:iconhazurasinner:
HazuraSinner Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2014
Hehe, nice going, you just proved her wrong. =D
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:iconmoriko-shizune-yukik:
Moriko-Shizune-Yukik Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I knew it!
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:iconmasteryuri666:
Masteryuri666 Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2014
For some reason everything Celestia said I heard as if she was Galandriel from Lord of the Rings (specifically when Frodo offers her the ring).
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:icondigitalrailroader:
digitalrailroader Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2014
I love Luna's expression in the last panel, it pretty much says "Oh no, Tia has gotten power hungry!"
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:icond715:
d715 Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2014
this better be about a ping pong battle or else this is going to get kinda lame
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:iconlemmiwinksgerbilking:
I think Celeastia is having these period of the mounth...

That's what you get if you replace Lauren Faust with George Martin.
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:icongreatkingrat88:
Greatkingrat88 Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2014
This sounds very Shakesperean, doesn't it?
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:iconhazurasinner:
HazuraSinner Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2014
Yes you are correct, in fact the author of the story based this on Henry V.
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:icongreatkingrat88:
Greatkingrat88 Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2014
It sounded a little bit odd for her to suddenly speak so formally, and in verse no less- but I like the reference.
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:iconcyber-angel-rowan:
Cyber-Angel-Rowan Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
When the heck did Applejack get there?!
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:iconhazurasinner:
HazuraSinner Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2014
Well, at this point in the fanfiction there are several characters there in the meeting and I've chosen to add Applejack in there, I mean, why not?
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:iconcyber-angel-rowan:
Cyber-Angel-Rowan Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Oh. OK then.
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:iconsuciefue:
sucieFue Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2014
A Wild Applejack appear
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:iconkravenergeist:
KravenErgeist Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Wow...that was equal parts beautifully eloquent and terrifyingly threatening. Reminiscent of Duane from Unsounded.
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:iconultradj4ever:
ULTRADJ4EVER Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2014
Wow, I never heard a conversation so intense about balls
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:iconhardalpha:
HardAlpha Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2014
damn celestia
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:iconrachellevitte:
RachelLevitte Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
woman, breath 
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:iconimperfectxiii:
ImperfectXIII Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wow, Celestia doesn't mess around. XD
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:iconjamesamoon:
JamesAMoon Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2014
HAHAHAHA that last line HAHAHA roflamoxqz
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:iconcarlitosmoff:
CarlitosMoff Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2014
Jesus Christ Celestian, please have a snickers bar!
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