Well this was discontinued because the person who asked me for these pages wasn't totally honest from the beginning with me, only after doing these he said that he intended to publish a book after the whole thing was done and, not only I do commissions for personal use only but it's also illegal because these characters aren't mine or his. Anyways, since you were just looking up for this because of my art then don't worry because I'll keep making pony art in the future.
Ok....I am pretty much terrified by Celestia now! Was this truly an insult from the Prince of Escambria or was this a message of good will that was horribly misinterpreted? Either way this is not going to end well at all is it? And leave it to Pinkie to chime in at the worst possible time!
I get the feeling of being terrified by Celestia, you should've seen my reactions as I advanced these panels, so much dark energy around. '8D I'm going to need to draw the Celestia we know and love after I'm done with these to get back some positivism. I'm not sure, this is just my guess, I think the ping pong balls was a metaphor for an insult, like "you have no balls, Equestria". I think this because there will be a war after this situation... '>_>
Really? Celestia is going to go to war over a thousand year old treaty that could be considered null in-void and a bunch of ping pong balls? Why? Is this tinny piece of land so important that she is willing to condemn thousands to death for it. Because that does not sound anything like Celestia, unless you are writing her to be evil and is trying to conquer the world or something.
Honestly if I was this prince I would personally go to see Celestia, ask to see the treat, go inside the closest bathroom, take a dump, then use said treaty to wipe my butt before handing it back to her. Because what right does a dead man have to signing over my nation after he has been rotting away in some long forgotten tomb for a thousand year? His signature is worth less than the paper it was written on or the dung that is now smeared across it.
Of course following this I would return to the army I had waiting for me along the border which I would then use to invade Equestria before Celestia had a chance to gather her own forces and invade Escambria since she was obviously using the treaty as an excuse to do just that.
Then my comment is directed toward you. Now while I was not being overly harsh in my criticism, I actually do enjoy you write for the rest of the comic. It is just here where it seems to be approaching the ledge and if you don't take the time to explain why Celestia is taking such drastic actions then it will go over the ledge and head first into a pile of rocks. But I do have confidence in your ability.